Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Children are the backbone of every country.So, there are people who tend to believe that youngsters should be encouraged to initiate social work as it will
in flourished society and
individualistic growth
the individualistic growth
of youngsters themselves. I, too believe that
motivation has more benefits than its drawbacks.
To begin
with, social work
children can be easily associated with personality development because during
drive, they tend to communicate with
a variety
of people, leads to polished verbal skills.
For example
, if they start convincing rural people to send their children in school they have to be
a convincing attitude along with developed verbal skills to deal with diverse kind of people there.
improved skill will help them lifelong in every arena. Apart from
, the true values of life like tolerance
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team spirit
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cooperation can be learnt.
that, young mind
the country with full enthusiasm that gives them feeling of
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
and self satisfaction.
worthiness for themselves brim them with self confidence and patriotic feeling.
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going and experiencing multiple culture and tradition make their
horizon so
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horizon, so
broad that add one more feather in their cap.
, It is truly said, no rose without thrones. Can the drawbacks of
initiation be ignored? Children go to school, participate
in different
curriculum activities, endure the pressure of peers, parents, and teachers and in
competitive world
the competitive world
a competitive world
they should not be expected to serve society without their self benefits.
kind of pressure might bring resentment in their mind. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
believe, notion of
a teenager
doing unpaid work is indeed
good but
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good, but
proper monitoring and care should be given to avoid untoward consequences.
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