In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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These days people are

become

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becoming

less interesting in reading in general and especially newspaper, no matter which country they

from

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since

they mostly prefer to use the internet.

However

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, in my opinion,

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believe that one of the causes is because newspapers are not

interesting

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interested

any more.

especially

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Especially

for young generations who likes more to read about musicians or artist

for example

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which

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Which

might be mentioned in the

newespaper but

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newspaper, but

newspaper but

newspapers but

not that much as they want it to be

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we can have a

newespapers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

which

concentrate

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concentrates

more on these topics to encourage people to read more.

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Also

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Also, besides

besides

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that now we can read about

anything just

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anything, just

look

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looking

up in our phones or

laptops it is

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laptops, it is

easier than buying a newspaper

everyday

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every day

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furthermore

in addition

Furthermore

, we can only concentrate on the topics that we prefer.

indeed these

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Indeed, these

Indeed these

websites

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can not

cannot

trusted unlike

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trusted, unlike

the

newespapers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

newspaper

which is considered cheaper than news

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websites we

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websites, we

can inform people about the possible risk for these

websites

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and the effect of fake news on

socity

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

and that the

newespaper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

newspaper

are more

truastble

Manageable; tractable; hence, moderate; not violent

treatable

than

websites

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addition, the size of the newspapers can become a hindrance.

normally

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Normally

, the size can make it harder to read on the bus or in the coffee shop

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we can reduce the size and make it easier for people to carry it with them it is will makes

meny

a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number

many

people read more in any place so the number of

newsapers

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newspaper

newspapers

reader will

increas

become bigger or greater in amount

increase

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conclusion, we can induce people to read

newspaper

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the newspaper

newspapers

a newspaper

by except their interest and try to focus

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what attract them the most.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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264 words

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Fully explain your ideas

Housing is essential for people. Some argue that the government should offer free housing for people who cannot afford it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right.

Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to have an experience from works. Do you think advantage outweigh disadvantages

More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?