In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days people are
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becoming
become
less interesting in reading in general and especially newspaper, no matter which country they
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since
from
they mostly prefer to use the internet.
However
, in my opinion,
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I
i
believe that one of the causes is because newspapers are not
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interested
interesting
any more.
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Especially
especially
for young generations who likes more to read about musicians or artist
for example
.
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Which
which
might be mentioned in the
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newspaper, but
newspaper but
newspapers but
newespaper but
not that much as they want it to be
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,
,
we can have a
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
newespapers
which
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concentrates
concentrate
more on these topics to encourage people to read more.
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Also, besides
Also
besides
that now we can read about
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anything, just
anything just
by
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looking
look
up in our phones or
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laptops, it is
laptops it is
easier than buying a newspaper
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every day
everyday
.
in addition
Furthermore
furthermore
, we can only concentrate on the topics that we prefer.
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Indeed, these
Indeed these
indeed these
websites
can not
cannot
can not
be
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trusted, unlike
trusted unlike
the
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
newspaper
newespapers
which is considered cheaper than news
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websites, we
websites we
can inform people about the possible risk for these
websites
and the effect of fake news on
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
socity
and that the
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
newspaper
newespaper
are more
Manageable; tractable; hence, moderate; not violent
treatable
truastble
than
websites
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In
in
addition, the size of the newspapers can become a hindrance.
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Normally
normally
, the size can make it harder to read on the bus or in the coffee shop
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.
.
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If
if
we can reduce the size and make it easier for people to carry it with them it is will makes
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
meny
people read more in any place so the number of
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newspaper
newspapers
newsapers
reader will
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increas
.
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In
in
conclusion, we can induce people to read
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the newspaper
newspapers
a newspaper
newspaper
by except their interest and try to focus
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on
in
what attract them the most.

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