In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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These days people are

become

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becoming

less interesting in reading in general and especially newspaper, no matter which country they

from

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since

they mostly prefer to use the internet.

However

, in my opinion,

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believe that one of the causes is because newspapers are not

interesting

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interested

any more.

especially

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Especially

for young generations who likes more to read about musicians or artist

for example

which

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Which

might be mentioned in the

newespaper but

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newspaper, but

newspaper but

newspapers but

not that much as they want it to be

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we can have a

newespapers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

which

concentrate

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concentrates

more on these topics to encourage people to read more.

Also

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Also, besides

besides

that now we can read about

anything just

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anything, just

look

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looking

up in our phones or

laptops it is

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laptops, it is

easier than buying a newspaper

everyday

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every day

furthermore

in addition

Furthermore

, we can only concentrate on the topics that we prefer.

indeed these

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Indeed, these

Indeed these

websites

can not

cannot

trusted unlike

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trusted, unlike

the

newespapers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

newspaper

which is considered cheaper than news

websites we

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websites, we

can inform people about the possible risk for these

websites

and the effect of fake news on

socity

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

and that the

newespaper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

newspaper

are more

truastble

Manageable; tractable; hence, moderate; not violent

treatable

than

websites

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addition, the size of the newspapers can become a hindrance.

normally

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Normally

, the size can make it harder to read on the bus or in the coffee shop

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we can reduce the size and make it easier for people to carry it with them it is will makes

meny

a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number

many

people read more in any place so the number of

newsapers

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newspaper

newspapers

reader will

increas

become bigger or greater in amount

increase

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conclusion, we can induce people to read

newspaper

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the newspaper

newspapers

a newspaper

by except their interest and try to focus

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what attract them the most.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Fully explain your ideas

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