In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days people are
become
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becoming
less interesting in reading in general and especially newspaper, no matter which country they
from
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since
they mostly prefer to use the internet.
However
, in my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that one of the causes is because newspapers are not
interesting
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interested
any more.
especially
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Especially
for young generations who likes more to read about musicians or artist
for example
.
which
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Which
might be mentioned in the
newespaper but
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newspaper, but
newspaper but
newspapers but
not that much as they want it to be
,
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,
we can have a
newespapers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
which
concentrate
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concentrates
more on these topics to encourage people to read more.
Also
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Also, besides
besides
that now we can read about
anything just
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anything, just
by
look
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looking
up in our phones or
laptops it is
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laptops, it is
easier than buying a newspaper
everyday
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every day
.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, we can only concentrate on the topics that we prefer.
indeed these
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Indeed, these
Indeed these
websites
can not
can not
cannot
be
trusted unlike
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trusted, unlike
the
newespapers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
newspaper
which is considered cheaper than news
websites we
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websites, we
can inform people about the possible risk for these
websites
and the effect of fake news on
socity
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
and that the
newespaper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
newspaper
are more
truastble
Manageable; tractable; hence, moderate; not violent
treatable
than
websites
in
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In
addition, the size of the newspapers can become a hindrance.
normally
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Normally
, the size can make it harder to read on the bus or in the coffee shop
.
Accept space
.
if
Suggestion
If
we can reduce the size and make it easier for people to carry it with them it is will makes
meny
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
people read more in any place so the number of
newsapers
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newspaper
newspapers
reader will
increas
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
.
in
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In
conclusion, we can induce people to read
newspaper
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the newspaper
newspapers
a newspaper
by except their interest and try to focus
in
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on
what attract them the most.
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