The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrate information about
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transaction
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transactions
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of Fairtrade-labelled
tea
and
pineapples
in two different years 2010 and 2015 in five
european
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countirs
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. in 2010
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tea
sales
were less than 13
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million
milloin
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million
euros in total the highest were in
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with 4
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million
milloin
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million
which was two
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higher than it was in
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the Netherlands
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mainwhile
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was
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the lowest
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however
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things
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changed the
sales
in
france
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have
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dramaticlly
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dramatically
increased to reach 21
milloin
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million
euros after it was only 2,8 million in 2010 ,
genrally
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generally
the
sales
had risen in 2015 In
fact
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in 2010 the
pineapples
transactions in
austria
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were
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significantly
sginificantly
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significantly
higher than
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othere
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other
others
countires
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countries
and it had
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to 48 million in 2015 as well the
sales
in
france
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the number in 2015 was three
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higher than it was in 2010 unlike other countries the number in
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Germany
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and
norway
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has
decreasd
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decreased
in 2015 In
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conclusion
, in 2015 the
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled
tea
and
pineapples
have
ries
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risen
in most of the countries but what
it
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was
remarkble
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remarkable
is the
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rise
ries
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rise
in
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pineapples
sales
in
austria
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followed by the
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increase
increas
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increase
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tea
sales
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, pineapples, sales with synonyms.
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