Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations. Others however think TV and internet are best way to learn about other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Travelling is considered by some of the people to become necessary for
learn
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learning
about other nations, while others believe that the
effective
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most effective
method to learn about countries are depends on
TV
and
internet
. Both perspectives have merits and drawbacks.
However
, from my point of view, I think that
travel
is more significant for a person to well understand about a
country
compare to use the information from
TV
and
internet
.
First
and foremost,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
provide a
best
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good
better
opportunity for people to understand the culture of that
country
by his or herself. By
visit
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visiting
all the famous places in that county, a
traveler
a person who changes location
traveller
can fully understand how is the local people's daily life.
Another
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Other
than that, it is
also
able to try the delicious local food by ourselves.
On the other hand
, some of the people support the opinion that
TV
and
internat
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the internet
internet
allow ones to better understand about a nation. Many
informations
a message received and understood
information
and resources that are
provide
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provided
from
TV
and
internet
is useful for
traveler
a person who changes location
traveller
travellers
to prepare for the
next
destination where he or she wants to
travel
for
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to
.
Furthermore
, it is commonly believed that using most of the resources and information that come from
TV
and
internet
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the internet
are the best way to start a new journey as all the
informations
a message received and understood
information
are fully
explain
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explained
and it is very
detail
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detailed
.
Nevertheless
, I believe that
travel
is still the
effective
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most effective
way to find out more interesting fact about a
country
.
For instance
, some enthusiastic local people will teach the
traveler
a person who changes location
traveller
their local language or even give something that are special in their
country
to
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for
traveler
a person who changes location
travellers
as a gift. Owing to
this
, ones can fully understand about the
country
through their personally feel and thinking. In the conclusion, these two perspectives have their own benefits
on
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of
learning about a
country
as these two methods provide good ways for us to well understand about a
country
.
However
, I personally think that
travel
is
the good
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the best
method as ones can feel and try something about the
country
by
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of
his or her own.
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