the crime rate nowadays is decreasing comapred to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime. do you agree or disagree

An improvement of
technology
has enabled minimising and solving of crimes
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,
,
thereby bringing down the criminal incidences.I strongly agree that it minimises
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crime, though
crime though
to some extent
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,
,
it can conceal committed crimes.
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Preventing
Prevention
and solving of crimes is now much easier
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,
,
because of improved technologies.
Firstly
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,
,
human biometric registration has brought a lot of ease to identify individuals in a distinct way. Easy identification of a person enables easy tracing when a
crime
is committed.
This
is
also
noted when banking has extended to the use
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a fingerprint to access services from the provider.
This
in turn minimises
crime
commission
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,
,
since a person can not inherit or have the same features that were used to identify the original owner.To add on
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,
,
DNA tests for samples left
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at
on
crime
scenes enables detection of an assailant in a murder case.
Technology
has improved the ability of identifying a person who has lost hair during a brawl in a violent case.
On the other
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hand, I
hand I
disagree that
technology
has brought a significant increase of
crime
detection and prevention.
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They
The
are other crimes that are committed using the improved
technology
.A noticeable example is when a
crime
is committed using
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th
available technical skills
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,
,
internet hacking and cracking has been one of the major
crime
contributors. In a lot of incidences the
crime
is not
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immediate
immediately
or can never be identified. To sum
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p,I concur that improved
technology
have enhanced
crime
prevention and solvi
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,but to some extent can be a
crime
concealer

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