Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is well known that governments tend to spend huge amounts of
money
on different projects, some more important than others, but when it comes to
arts
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the arts
, some people say that those
money
Suggestion
monies
should be redirected to more important areas. I disagree with
this
statement, as
arts
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the arts
is
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are
a very important part of people's life.
First
of all, the concept of creating
art
is
a
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an
activity people do since they started painting their cave walls, maybe even before that era, and they should never stop, because it is one of the things that makes us humans.
Moreover
, no other creature on
this
planet is capable to
interract
act together or towards others or with others
interact
conciously
with awareness
consciously
with the
evironment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
in
such
a way as to create
breath-taking
tending to cause suspension of regular breathing
breathtaking
goods.
For example
, the sculpture of David, known all over the world, cost the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
big amounts of
money
at that time, but now you can't put a price on it, it's priceless.
On the other hand
, we can
easealy
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
see why some people think that the arts budget should be
spend
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spent
on some other projects,
art
being so expensive, a lot more things could be done with those amounts of
money
.
Thus
, they think, especially in poorer countries, where the basic needs of the people are
barrely
only a very short time before
barely
met, that with
thouse
plural of that
those
these
funds the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should build schools, more roads, invest in the healthcare system, and so on.
That is
partially true, they should spend
on infrastructure more
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more on infrastructure
than on arts, trying to take care of the people's needs
first
, but have a lowered
art
budget if the case requires it.
On the other hand
, we can't contest that
art
is a
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
where there can be benefits for everybody, the government, the people, and
finally
the individual with interest in
arts
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the arts
.
Furthermore
, not everybody is the same, some people have more affinity to arts than others, but the ones that do need a job can't live if there is no
money
to invest in
this
type of
activitiy
any specific behavior
activity
activities
. Not to mention that,
art
galleries
cand
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
produce a decent income to the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
at any point in time,
expecially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
in the future. In conclusion
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
can firmly say that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
disagree with people saying that
money
spend on
arts
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the arts
should be
spend
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spent
on more important things, because
art
is
unexplicable
in an unexplained or unexplainable manner
inexplicably
beautiful and we are
atracted
direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
attracted
to it, it makes us humans, and than that, it produces huge amounts of income to everyone
envolved
connected by participation or association or use
involved
.
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