Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

Travelling to various countries has always been a fascination for people to experience and appreciate conventional heritage and
culture
.
Tourism
has flourished by leaps and bounds and countries greatly promote and support
tourism
. I too believe, that encouraging
tourism
has more benefits than drawbacks. In
this
essay, we will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of promoting
tourism
. To embark on, undoubtedly, inviting people from assorted
culture
, races and geographies enhance the
monetory
relating to or involving money
monetary
monitoring
countribution
the part played by a person in bringing about a result
contribution
contributions
to government which help in
development
Suggestion
the development
of the country and facilities to the citizens.
Moreover
, tourist throng to countless historic sites which unveil the potential for trades for small handicraft businesses and have a positive influence on the income source for their living.
Furthermore
,
tourism
plays a vital role in building relationship between nations and people. Visiting other countries can lead to an appreciation of the local
culture
and helps build relationships between people leading to a better mutual understanding and a higher level of tolerance.
On the contrary
, having more tourists visiting historic and heritage sites can lead to difficulties in maintenance and
detoriation
a symptom of reduced quality or strength
deterioration
of
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
value. It is important that cultural and scenic places are protected for future generations.
Manier
times tourists
demonstrates
Suggestion
demonstrate
resentment due to confinement basis local laws. Tourist may not understand all the aspects of the
culture
they are
visiting but
Accept comma addition
visiting, but
they need to understand they are guests and must behave appropriately. According to me, the merits of
tourism
outnumbered
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
demerits.
Tourism
plays a significant role in
nations growth
Suggestion
the nation's growth
nation's growth
and inculcate symphony and harmony between nations and release political tensions.
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