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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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These
days
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day
day's
 examination is the
way
 to assess student knowledge in the subject that they have studied and it is
have
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has
 been constantly with pen and paper
.
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.
a
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A
 plenty of people believe that
this
way
 it no much longer the best
way
 to do the exam
.
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.
In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 support the fact that taking a pen and paper exam it is not the most preferable idea anymore. Since a long time pen and paper were the only available method. But since we had
progrased
gradual improvement or growth or development
progressed
 in many things we should start to think
in
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of
anthere
any of various alternatives; some other
another
way
 to take the exams as computers or any
digtial
displaying numbers rather than scale positions
digital
 ways in general
.
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.
In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, some countries
already start
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have already started
are already starting
 to use
this
way
.
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.
However
, people refused to use any of
this options
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these options
this option
 due to the
proplems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 it is might happen as
computer error
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a computer error
.
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.
also they
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Also, they
Also they
 think cheating will become easier for the student, despite the fact cheating it is has always been an issue.
Furthermore
,
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,
the electronic correction is much more accurate than the manual
way
,
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,
and
also
 faster. In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
,
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,
I would like to say that people do not have to be so strict about one thing they have to try a different
ways meybe
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ways, maybe
ways maybe
then
 they will like the new option much ore than the previous methods.
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