The advent of the internet has made it it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal experiences In your essay.

Working in the 21st century is immensely facilitated
with
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by
the emergence of the world wide web.
This
has made working from the comfort of one’s living space a possibility. I believe there are more benefits to
this
than drawbacks.
This
essay will discuss the many advantages of working from
home
then
, touch on the easily manageable disadvantages. On the one hand, one’s
productivity
is enhanced when they are comfortable.
Therefore
,
this
set up stimulates creativity and hard work because when one is in their comfort zone they have decreased stress levels.
Moreover
, stress is directly related to decreased
productivity
.
For example
, I find that
i
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I
attain better exam results when
Im
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I'm
relaxed at
home
studying from my room in opposed to studying
at
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in
a library or working space.
Secondly
, working from
home
eliminates the inconvenience of transportation. Some people spend hours commuting back and forth every day,
however with
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however, with
the ease of communication and requirement for just a wifi connection, the need for transport is deemed unessential.
Therefore
, time wasted on travel is substituted by actual work and
productivity
. From my personal experience; my job was a two hour commute, and I found that if I stayed at
home
and performed my task from
home
I would be more accomplished.
On the other hand
a negating effect of all these great positives, is face to face interaction is diminished.
This
results in a sense of detachment from the workplace.
Consequently
,
this
loss of interaction leads to
miscommunication
and distance between employer and employee, which is essential in ensuring a functional,
co-operative
involving the joint activity of two or more
cooperative
working environment.
However
,
this
could easily be overcome by great online applications like
facetime
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Facetime
and
skype
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Skype
. In conclusion, I believe working from
home
is more advantageous as it aids
productivity
through the eradication of modern day barriers
such
as difficult travel to and from the workplace and amplification of talent through eradication of stress
.
Accept space
.
In future, working at
home
should be an available option at all business’s.

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