The advent of the internet has made it it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal experiences In your essay.

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Working in the 21st century is immensely facilitated

with

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the emergence of the world wide web.

This

has made working from the comfort of one’s living space a possibility. I believe there are more benefits to

this

than drawbacks.

This

essay will discuss the many advantages of working from

home

then

, touch on the easily manageable disadvantages. On the one hand, one’s

productivity

is enhanced when they are comfortable.

Therefore

this

set up stimulates creativity and hard work because when one is in their comfort zone they have decreased stress levels.

Moreover

, stress is directly related to decreased

productivity

For example

, I find that

refers to the speaker or writer

attain better exam results when

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I'm

relaxed at

home

studying from my room in opposed to studying

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a library or working space.

Secondly

, working from

home

eliminates the inconvenience of transportation. Some people spend hours commuting back and forth every day,

however with

Accept comma addition

however, with

the ease of communication and requirement for just a wifi connection, the need for transport is deemed unessential.

Therefore

, time wasted on travel is substituted by actual work and

productivity

. From my personal experience; my job was a two hour commute, and I found that if I stayed at

home

and performed my task from

home

I would be more accomplished.

On the other hand

a negating effect of all these great positives, is face to face interaction is diminished.

This

results in a sense of detachment from the workplace.

Consequently

this

loss of interaction leads to

miscommunication

and distance between employer and employee, which is essential in ensuring a functional,

co-operative

involving the joint activity of two or more

cooperative

working environment.

However

this

could easily be overcome by great online applications like

facetime

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Facetime

and

skype

Suggestion

Skype

. In conclusion, I believe working from

home

is more advantageous as it aids

productivity

through the eradication of modern day barriers

such

as difficult travel to and from the workplace and amplification of talent through eradication of stress

Accept space

In future, working at

home

should be an available option at all business’s.

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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