Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

These days a plenty of people turned to the vegetarian lifestyle they think stop eating
meat
will improve their health.
Also
,
Accept space
,
it will have a positive effect on the wildlife and the environment.In my opinion, I partly agree with
this
point of the
viwe
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
view
viewer
.
Aswell
Suggestion
As well
, I believe that
meat
it is
importaint
of great significance or value
important
in our diet.
However
, part of being
vegetarins
eater of fruits and grains and nuts; someone who eats no meat or fish or (often) any animal products
vegetarian
is to stop eating
meat
includ
have as a part, be made up out of
include
fish and chickens.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
this
kind of food can damage your body
reither
on the contrary
rather
than
helpe
give help or assistance; be of service
help
helped
hope
, in
newdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
many people are
haveing
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
having
a serious
issus
Suggestion
issue
issues
with obesity due to their eating habits and
meates
the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food
meats
mats
mites
can be the main reason for that
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it
is incloud
Suggestion
includes
is include
is included
is includes
a high
caloris
Suggestion
calorie
calories
colours
and
also
it could be a major cause for blood pressure Indeed, recent
reserech
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researches
have
inducte
Suggestion
induced
induce
indicated
people to change
thier
of them or themselves
their
diet,
this
resarechs
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
for
example people
Accept comma addition
example, people
with diabetes have discovered that the
vegetarine
eater of fruits and grains and nuts; someone who eats no meat or fish or (often) any animal products
vegetarian
diet it is the best solution for their
proplem
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
problems
.
Whlie
Suggestion
While
otheres
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
with weight issues tend to reduce their depend on
meat
and they try to eat more vegetables. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
I think that daily meals need to include all the different
nutrens
any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
nutrients
. As well, we have to guaranty that our body
receive
Suggestion
receives
enough energy by
eat
Suggestion
eating
both vegetables and
meat
.
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