Many headmasters are considering a new school rule: ‘Mobile phones are not allowed at school’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this rule? Write an essay of about 250 words to support your answer.

There has appeared a debate over the utilization of mobile phones at academic environment. According to many principals, students are not permitted to
use
cell
phones at
school
. Personally, I absolutely disagree with them on
this
school
policy.
Firstly
, what I put in priority is mobile communication that
cell
phone
bring
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brings
about
to
being one more than one
two
students. It is common knowledge that because mobile phones are handy and independent of a landline connection, students are likely to carry them everywhere.
This
,
therefore
, helps them to contact instantly with their parents or relatives in case of emergency. More interestingly, some kinds of smart phones functioned as computers connected to the Internet enable student to communicate easily and cheaply with others thanks to the available services as
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, Instagram, Facebook, and Messenger. Without doubt, mobile communication is a convincing reason against the ban of
cell
phones at
school
.
Secondly
, study efficiency holds no less importance. Apparently, pupils cannot deny the key role of
cell
phones in helping them accumulating knowledge to serve their study if they own an Internet-connected
cell
phone. By making
use
of the Internet services, available
Websites
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Web sites
, they are likely to find supplementary materials related to the topics learned
at
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in
class
.
More notably
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Most notably
, they can raise problems in a forum for
further
discussion.
This
, obviously, stimulates them to gain a deeper understanding of the matter in
class
. Opponents of my idea may claim that children who are allowed to
use
cell
phones at
school
often neglect their studying and may be addicted to online games because they spend more time on smart phones than lessons. A closer examination/ analysis,
however
, indicates/ suggests that the argument may not be supported by the fact. The number of students in
this
case is in
minority
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the minority
. During the
class
time, students are well observed by their teachers who allow them to make
use
of
cellphone
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cell phone
in
necessary situation
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necessary situations
a necessary situation
. At recess, within 10 minutes, it does not matter if pupils
use
their
cell
phones as a mean of entertainment to relax themselves with various applications after
the tense
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the tension
of the
class
. Beyond a shadow of doubt,
cell
phones provide students with more advantages than disadvantages. In conclusion, the aforementioned are the convincing reasons for my opposing the prohibition of mobiles at academic setting. It is my strong recommendation that principals should take my views into account to adopt proper
polices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
on students’
use
of
cell
phones at learning environment so that they can take full
use
of mobile phones to serve their lives and their study best.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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