The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there are more cars as compared to
number
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the number
of cars 50-60 years back. The
number
has drastically risen in
past few years
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the past few years
. If
this
trend continues I am sure one day there would not be roads to walk. In
this
essay I will present
couple
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a couple
of
solution
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solutions
that could be implemented to tackle
this
rising issue. When cars were introduced, it was a luxury item and only the niche rich crowd could afford it. But today, with easy bank loans and schemes, every family has now 2 cars. Due to
this
, the
number
of cars on
road
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the road
has reached its
peek
the most extreme possible amount or value
peak
causing long traffic lines and deadly pollution.
Also
, roads are getting
widened which
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widened, which
directly leads to cutting of
trees whereas
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trees, whereas
in metro cities
such
as Bangalore, for covering 2
kilometers
a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)
kilometres
by
car
, it takes almost 2 hours. There are various solutions to
this
problem,
firstly
, alternate forms of transport should be encouraged more by the government and reducing the transport fares to a nominal rate so that everyone could afford it. The public transportation options
such
as metros, buses, local trains should be properly maintained and doubled in
number
so that it is easily accessible.
Secondly
, international laws should be implemented for ownership of
car
, meaning one family should buy only 1
car
and to buy
second
car
first
car
should be sold or destroyed. If
this
law is
implemented
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implemented, then
then
enormous
number
of cars will be reduced. In conclusion to
this
essay, I strongly believe that alternative forms of transport and international law for ownership of
car
should be implemented else that day is not far when there
wont
will not
won't
be enough space in road to walk.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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