'Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.' To what extent to you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is often argued by many that kids participating in
video
games
is considered
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are considered
to be a loss of valuable time,
therefore
, they should be banned from plying them. I fully agree with
this
notion.
This
essay will discuss how the continuous use of online games is detrimental to a
childs
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child's
optical
health and
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health, and
how their content may negatively impact children’s fragile minds.
Firstly
, children should not play
video
games due to their numerous harmful health effects, especially on the eyes.
This
is because hours per day are spent fixated on a laptop screen playing these games,
consequently
, putting a strain on eyes and reducing their optical capacity.
This
can be exemplified by the publication in 2014, Childs Optical Health Society Paper, which concluded that 50% of children who wear glasses spend at least one hour a day playing computer games. Overall,
this
may result in grave consequences like children requiring glasses.
Secondly
, computer games have an extremely negative influence on kids mentality.
This
is due to the fact that these games may contain inappropriate language, harmful imagery and concepts.
Thus
, leading to aggressive behaviour and thoughts.
In addition
, kids may attempt to mimic
actions
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the actions
and language seen.
For example
, Grand theft auto –a famous law
breaking aggressive
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breaking, aggressive
video
game- was found to be a common factor amongst 70% of juvenile offenders in the
uk
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UK
in 2018. Owing to the fragile nature of young minds, they may easily be swayed and influenced by these games. In conclusion,
although
there is much debate surrounding the topic of the youth and computer games, undoubtedly it is
a
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an
unfavourable trend as it reduces optical health and promotes violence in some instances. In
future
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the future
, I hope
video
games are unavailable by law for children under 18.

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