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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

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Administation
Suggestion
The administration
Administration
 is investing a high
amount
 of money in exploring the mortals on other planets. The significant
amount
 of people think that rulers are wasting enough treasure of the nation in spending on discovering life,
instead
this
 could be spent on addressing more public issues. I believe governments should continue doing
researches
Suggestion
research
 as well as they should address the
society
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societal
 issues. Primarily, the predominant factor for researching living
beigns
the state or fact of existing
beings
 in other asteroids is that, if by any chance disaster occur on
earth there
Accept comma addition
earth, there
 should be some place in the solar system where human can survive,
in addition
 to
this
 living being's on earth has to be very careful about the foreign invasions which might happen, as the
researches
Suggestion
research
 states aliens can invade earth at any time for survival,
however
 despite finding no proof of existence of other mankind, we have learnt many things about other planets and the
sattelites
man-made equipment that orbits around the earth or the moon
satellites
 we have sent are being useful one or other way.
On the other hand
,
inspite
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in spite
 of poor
economy some
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economy, some
economic some
economic economic some
 governments are unnecessarily wasting
amount
Suggestion
the amount
on
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of
failure
Suggestion
failed
 experiments. No matter how useful or not those experiments are to the nation, one has to think about the economic growth of the society and individuals which solves the problems of them. Investing on visions which are no where related to current situations makes the growth of the country very complicated, despite
this
amount
 could be spent on those who are in need. To conclude, Not only conducting research and development to know the existence of life on others helps up in many
ways but
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ways, but
also
 investments on other society problems enables the development.
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