Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?

Owning a

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is obviously more convenient when it comes to

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

, but I do believe that the bad sides caused by

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, specifically in creating traffic jam and

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-environmental damage, exceed the

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benefits

benefit

of using a

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. On the one hand,

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can be considered as one of

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the main vehicle

to transport everywhere, from the market to the office, especially the private cars. In comparison with the public transportation that available in my country, the private vehicle clearly is the best option for transportation due to its

good

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best

condition of facilities and privacy, while the mass transportations often have the old and uncomfortable seated and the not really working

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conditioner, which somehow make the passengers feel nauseous during the trip.

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, the own

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is pointed out the convenience,

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the flexibility of

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

period and routes.

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, the growth of individual

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creates a heavy congestion.

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happens frequently in the metropolitan cities in my country,

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as Jakarta, Surabaya, Semarang, Pontianak and Bandung. And the traffic takes mostly in the morning, starting around 6.00a.

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, and in the afternoon, about at 4.00 p.

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, the time when people go and come back from work.

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traffic jam might occur about more than 4 hours in a day, and during

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time, the fuel usage by cars certainly is increasing, which means the cars produce more fuel-waste, which usually is released into the

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.

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, the situation later leads into more

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-pollutant that can harm the

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environment, which will have no good impact for

human being

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human beings

a human being

, particularly in health issues, like lung disease and asthma. To reiterate, having a private

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is supporting a

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

with the flexibility, but

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action might cause an avoidable rush hour and produce the

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pollution.