many university students live with their families,while other live away from home because their university are in different places. what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations.

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The education of university is essential for students who completed their schooling and want to become a

sucessful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

life.

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Myraidof

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

live with their parents and

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other live

away from the hometown due to the colleges away from their home.It has pros and cons,

refers to the speaker or writer

discuss both situations in

folllowing

about to be mentioned or specified

following

paragraphs. The

first

and foremost reason of living with parents that

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the interaction between

guardians and

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guardians, and

adults will be strong and they can easily share their problems with parents and

grand parents

a parent of your father or mother

grandparents

regarding study

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health and personal

also

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They learn

ethics

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the ethics

and rituals of their family and

also

respect

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the respect

of others, in

adition

a component that is added to something to improve it

addition

to, the proper take care of patents is one of the

way

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ways

to reduce the youth crime

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the

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

are attach

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are attached

are attaching

with peer groups and relatives.

On the other hand

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far from their homes the students become more independent from others,

for example

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if the students will

independent they

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independently, they

independently they

can take decision of some situations

such

as related to health

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study, personal

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inspite

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In spite

Inspite

this

they learn values of daily living.

Furthermore

, which teenagers are living with

family

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the family

they are pampered by parents and they become stubborn

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they

foget

dismiss from the mind; stop remembering

forget

forgot

forgets

the value of ethics and customs.

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, when the

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

are away from their

parents they

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parents, they

adapt wrong habits and

some time

at some indefinite or unstated time

sometime

they

struct

a proud stiff pompous gait

strut

in big problems like crime

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drug

adicition

being abnormally tolerant to and dependent on something that is psychologically or physically habit-forming (especially alcohol or narcotic drugs)

addiction

addictions

and bad company

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In conclusion, while there will be

clerily

without doubt or question

clearly

differance

the quality of being unlike or dissimilar

difference

differences

the personal circumstances of individual,

universities student

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universities, student

sub potential advantage and disadvantage of living at home or away from home can be identified.

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many university students live with their families,while other live away from home because their university are in different places. what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations.

Fully explain your ideas

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication out weigh the disadvantages?

It is common nowadays for each member of family to have their own peace of modern technology. Some people think that this will lead to a break down in the family relationships and communication to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources on the young people. Do you agree and disagree?

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?