many university students live with their families,while other live away from home because their university are in different places. what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations.

The education of university is essential for students who completed their schooling and want to become a
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
life.
myraidof
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Myraidof
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
live with their parents and
otherlive
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other live
away from the hometown due to the colleges away from their home.It has pros and cons,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
discuss both situations in
folllowing
about to be mentioned or specified
following
paragraphs. The
first
and foremost reason of living with parents that
,
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,
the interaction between
guardians and
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guardians, and
adults will be strong and they can easily share their problems with parents and
grand parents
a parent of your father or mother
grandparents
regarding study
,
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,
health and personal
also
,
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,
They learn
ethics
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the ethics
and rituals of their family and
also
respect
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the respect
of others, in
adition
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
to, the proper take care of patents is one of the
way
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ways
to reduce the youth crime
,
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,
the
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
are attach
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are attached
are attaching
with peer groups and relatives.
On the other hand
,
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,
far from their homes the students become more independent from others,
for example
,
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,
if the students will
independent they
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independently, they
independently they
can take decision of some situations
such
as related to health
,
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,
study, personal
.
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.
inspite
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In spite
Inspite
of
this
they learn values of daily living.
Furthermore
, which teenagers are living with
family
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the family
they are pampered by parents and they become stubborn
,
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,
they
foget
dismiss from the mind; stop remembering
forget
forgot
forgets
the value of ethics and customs.
Moreover
, when the
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
are away from their
parents they
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parents, they
adapt wrong habits and
some time
at some indefinite or unstated time
sometime
they
struct
a proud stiff pompous gait
strut
in big problems like crime
,
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,
drug
adicition
being abnormally tolerant to and dependent on something that is psychologically or physically habit-forming (especially alcohol or narcotic drugs)
addiction
addictions
and bad company
.
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.
In conclusion, while there will be
clerily
without doubt or question
clearly
differance
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
differences
the personal circumstances of individual,
universities student
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universities, student
sub potential advantage and disadvantage of living at home or away from home can be identified.
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