Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduatesbhave led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history and only offer practical degree coursesbthat maximises chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increased unemployment rate and the growing
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
fees
has discouraged
Suggestion
have discouraged
few people
Suggestion
a few people
to notice the benefits of arts subjects and driving themselves to take up other degree courses with more opportunities.
Although
, the upsurge in the education cost and unemployment
bothers
Suggestion
has bothered
me yet I
m
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
am
totally against the notion as the passion for education vary
in
Suggestion
from
person,
moreover
, these courses are
major requirement
Suggestion
a major requirement
to
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of
the society in current scenario.
Firstly
, the students
develop
Suggestion
develops
interest for the various subjects by the experience and would practically work on it. The expenditure to learn and the fear of less opportunities must not affect their aspirations. All the professions have relevance in its own sphere,
for instance
, the
archeologist
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologist
which is one of the major realm I'd arts play crucial roles in understanding the hidden ancient mysteries.
Secondly
, the philosophy which follows in the list if the subjects is
high
Suggestion
highly
valued these days as most people are stressed out and require motivation.
Further
, the job prospects in these fields pay
lucaratve
producing a sizeable profit
lucrative
wages though
Accept comma addition
wages, though
the number of availabilities is less as compared to the other practical degree courses. The reason is that the human resources required and the work done in these fields is way less.
Hence
, the hefty pay for these progressing courses is worthy. The joblessness could
ofcourse
Suggestion
of course
curbed by providing the limited admissions in universities and development of the field by conducting research will rise the requirement of the personal. To conclude, the subjects of art group in the universities should thrive despite of excess cost as it will be paid back in
futire
Suggestion
the future
future
and
their
in or at that place
there
is certainly
chance
Suggestion
a chance
the chance
of progression in these realms.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

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