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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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In the 21st century, the market of solar panels is growing and is expected to touch new heights in the upcoming years.
However
, till now we have managed to make use of just 1/14000 of the sunlight we get from the sun. The visionary entrepreneurs Elon Musk started the company solar city with the main motive of making the maximum utilisation of the resources we have. Solar city is a company founded by Elon Musk, which makes solar panels. There are several advantages of using solar
energy
.
For instance
, we can save more electricity. The electricity we save could be used in villages and rural areas of the country. As poor people cannot afford to buy solar panels. Another advantage of using solar
energy
 is that it is cost effective. It is
also
 beneficial for people living in the urban areas of the country, as it is a one time investment. Some of the disadvantages of using solar
energy
 could be, it is costlier for most of the people. Poor people may not be able to afford to have solar panels in their house. Apart from that I don't see any disadvantages of using solar
energy
. It
is has gained
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has gained
is gaining
gains
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 popularity because of the fact it is
eco
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Eco
 friendly and as the technology expands the world is going to have better and
eco
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Eco
 friendly products. To recapitulate, every product or service has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 own pros and cons. But in my
opinion there
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opinion, there
 aren't too many disadvantages of using solar
energy
.
Rather I
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Rather, I
 would suggest people to invest
on
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in
 solar
energy
 as it doesn't harm the environment or the
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
 of
planet
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the planet
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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