The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

In my opinion, Sports and exercise should be

tha

definite article

the

main factor in order for

childrends

a young person of either sex

children

to

maintian

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintain

thier

of them or themselves

their

health

. Schools should not only be responsible for our

childrens

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children's

children

mental

health

and growth but

also

for keeping our

childrens

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children's

children

physical

health

under check. Obesity

have become

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has become

is becoming

such

a big issue in our world that every

third

person is suffering from obesity, not to mention the

deseases

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

diseases

that

comes

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come

with it,

such

as, type 1 and type 2

Diabeties

a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst

diabetes

, Heart risks, cancer and so on.In our culture, Schools have just become a place where we think students should gain A* in every academic subject and think of

physiical

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

education as a secondary element.

This

thinking is just plain wrong and we need to take some

harss

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horse's

horses

horses'

harsh

actions

inorder

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in order

to overcome

this

issue. Teaching children about their

health

and how to

maintine

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintain

a healthy

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

is pretty important in my opinion and

this

should it start in schools. Schools could conduct special

assembleys

a group of machine parts that fit together to form a self-contained unit

assemblies

assembly

inorder

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in order

to teach

the young

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younger

students about the importance of exercise and sport. Schools could

also

organize different events

inorder

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in order

to encourage the students to play different sports and so on. But in my opinion, only increasing the time

spend

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spent

on sports in schools to solve

this

problem isn't enough. We need to do more

inorder

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in order

to fully take control of

this

growing situation.

First

of all, we can easily join hands with parents and show them that just by increasing an hour of outdoor activities can

drasticly

in a drastic manner

drastically

increases

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increase

their

childs

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child's

health

. Obesity is growing like a cancer in our world, taking hold of everything, rotting away the beauty of

this

world.

This

is a serious issue and we need to tackle it as soon and as

severly

to a severe or serious degree

severely

as possible.