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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

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These days, it is a hot potato that parents are getting more
complaint
Suggestion
complaining
 about their kids from schools, and relative that they are not acting well with others. A group of people thinking that guardians are the one who is mainly responsible for
this
cause
an occurrence of something
case
 because they are allocating more
time
 to their work
instead
 of looking after their children at an early age. I totally agree with
this
 group of people and their suggestion. There are several reasons why parents are the main factor behind social mistakes of their children. One of them is,
children’s
Suggestion
children
 misbehave with the elder people. Learning of respect does not come from the school; they need to be taught by own father and mother.
For example
, it is found in a survey that parents who raised and spend good
time
 together with their school-age children increase more respect for the elder person compare
to
Suggestion
with
who
objective case of "who" ("who" is also often used in the objective)
whom
 not. Another reason is that, decreasing calmness nature in kids. People frequent receiving complain about
fight
Suggestion
the fight
 or misbehave
in
Suggestion
on
 the school for their children.
This
 happens because of the teenager does require family oriented strictness towards their regular
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. It is possible if parents are engaging for a good
time
 with them, making understandably for the situation and explaining the pros and cons of bad
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
For instance
, in Canada, most of the students whose guardian are highly equipped with their work and not giving
time
 for their loved one, are facing so many troubles in their routine and educational life. In conclusion, growing age requires so much attention towards kids, and it only can be possible with their parents. It will not only enhance their
ability but
Accept comma addition
ability, but
also
 help to maintain their good manners for society.

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