In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

In countries
such
as USA obesity is a very common issue and because of that government charges higher taxes
to
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for
the companies who produces foods which causes
such
diseases. In my opinion,
this
way of preventing the unhealthy
food
to spread is very effective. Most of the unhealthy foods are
tasty which is
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tasty, which is
why they are so popular yet dangerous. For companies it is easy to make more money by produce
such
food
. So charging them with high taxes is
good
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the best
way to reduce the amount of unhealthy
food but
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food, but
there are
also
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
ways too.
For example
promoting healthy foods, making healthy foods abundant and available for everyone. I think it is better to give the healthy alternative for unhealthy
food
before restricting it or charging higher taxes. Increasing the taxes for
such
companies might have bad consequences. One of them is increase of tax fraud among them and illegal selling. These crimes
may happen due the
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may happen due to the
fact that higher taxes will make it harder to gain profit so they will have to commit crime action. So the chance that
this
method could be effective or not which cause only aggravating the situation are equal. So to stop them without making it worst they need to use other ways which are more effective and will not cause any more danger. In conclusion, I believe that charging extra money is good to reduce those
companies but
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companies, but
it is not the only possible way and we should use more methods to stop it.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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