In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

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In countries

such

as USA obesity is a very common issue and because of that government charges higher taxes

Suggestion

for

the companies who produces foods which causes

such

diseases. In my opinion,

this

way of preventing the unhealthy

food

to spread is very effective. Most of the unhealthy foods are

tasty which is

Suggestion

tasty, which is

why they are so popular yet dangerous. For companies it is easy to make more money by produce

such

food

. So charging them with high taxes is

good

Suggestion

the best

way to reduce the amount of unhealthy

food but

Accept comma addition

food, but

there are

also

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

ways too.

For example

promoting healthy foods, making healthy foods abundant and available for everyone. I think it is better to give the healthy alternative for unhealthy

food

before restricting it or charging higher taxes. Increasing the taxes for

such

companies might have bad consequences. One of them is increase of tax fraud among them and illegal selling. These crimes

may happen due the

Suggestion

may happen due to the

fact that higher taxes will make it harder to gain profit so they will have to commit crime action. So the chance that

this

method could be effective or not which cause only aggravating the situation are equal. So to stop them without making it worst they need to use other ways which are more effective and will not cause any more danger. In conclusion, I believe that charging extra money is good to reduce those

companies but

Accept comma addition

companies, but

it is not the only possible way and we should use more methods to stop it.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

252 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

overconsumption
diet-related illnesses
healthcare system
disincentive
public health
safeguard
economic burden
lower-income populations
public education campaigns
food labeling
health implications
obesity
heart disease
diabetes
nutrition education
punitive measures
inequity
subsidies
regulations
productivity

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