Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

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Parents are people

who’s

of which person?

whose

child

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sees after his birth and during his growing period he learns everything from them. The parents are

role model

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the role model

role models

for their

child

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. Their responsibility is not only taking care, feeding and nursing but teaching too. At the early age

child

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learn everything from their parents.

Parent

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The parent

teach

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teaches

them

difference

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the difference

between good and bad, right and

wrong what

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wrong, what

to do and what to not do. So the role of parents in

childs

a young person of either sex

children

growing is important. Unlike

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teacher parents

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teacher, parents

know their

childs

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child's

children

children's

child

personality and they know how to teach them. Teachers

on the other hand

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teach generally whole class and

teacher

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uses general terms and parents use terms that their

child

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understand.

However

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, even if parents teach

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child

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children

the child

a child

better than

teacher

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they can’t give the

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child

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child's

knowledge that he need. The

child

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taught by his parents start seeing

world

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the world

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from

his

parents

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parents'

point of view and will not have his own

opinion

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. The

teacher

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may not be clear for student but they

not impose

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don't impose

aren't imposing

their own point of view

on the

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contrary they

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contrary, they

give him general

opinion

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and give him choose on his own

thus

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he could have his own

opinion

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. Parents

opinion

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about the world may not be appropriate because the world in which their

child

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live are a lot different. But they can give their

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child

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child's

basic knowledge. Even if they don’t understand social and technological changes they can teach the

child

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thing than never change. In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

must say that parent are important

teacher

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in our lives and even if they have

lack

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a lack

of knowledge about some subject they still can show their

child

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right path and subject that they lack of

child

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can learn from

school

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a school teacher

teacher

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or other.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

287 words

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