Some people believe that for a hobby to be enjoyable it should be hard to acquire or learn. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the salad days of a millennium, all
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hobby
that is
amusing and should be difficult to achieve and learn. I am in consummate accord with
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a number of
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reasons
for behind
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phenomenon, one can go to the list. The top-notch concrete reason is that if people have interested and efficient knowledge for doing their
hobby
so they could be easier to attain knowledge without any types of arduous in their life
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example, in the recent survey from Oxford University, the researcher reckons that almost 85% people around the world who's never
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had
had difficulty to
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achieve
of their all types
hobby
. That’s the way it very essays to obtain and learn about the
hobby
. But not everyone agrees with
this
statement because there are lots of available on the earth, which are dangerous for people,
such
as
scuba
diving, bungee jumping and so more things which should be difficult to do
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this type
these types
of
hobby
and which have various
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struggles
for doing that types
hobby
.
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For
example, the world-famous
scuba
diver is
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the state of owing something (especially money)
debt
death
, who could practice on
scuba
diving after doing that they were world famous for
scuba
diving
.
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These ultra-challenging experiences are paradoxically the main advantage of interesting on their
hobby
because they are
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done
with happiness. Agglomerating, all the points elaborated above, it can be concluded that learning various types of skills are very difficult to learn and acquire their
hobby
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