In nearly all science courses at university, there are significantly more male students than female students. what is the reason for this? what could be done to balance out the numbers?

Science and engineering have always been the type of courses which are dominated by males.
However
, there has been a slight grow
in
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with
the female population opting for
such
courses as well. There could be several
reason
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reasons
behind the dominance of males in
such
courses.
For instance
, in states like Haryana and Bihar there has always been a mediocre thinking about girls going for
such
courses.
This
is the reason why the
females
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female
population is extremely less in engineering in comparison to males.
However
,
girls
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the girls
have dominated boys in courses related to
medicines
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medicine
. Again of the same thinking that girls can only be good at medicines. Even most of the families don't spend that much amount of money on their
girl's
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girls'
education which they spend on their boy's education.
This
could balanced by taking proper initiatives by the government and social workers.
For example
- India's Prime Minister has taken up
such
initiatives, which educates the people of rural areas about the importance of
girl
child and how they are equally important as boys. The colleges and universities can offer special quotas for
girl
in
such
streams.
For example
-female quota in IIM colleges. Some discount on the tuition fees can be given to
girl
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girls
a girl
the girl
who have been consistently performing well. To recapitulate, awareness should be spread about the gender equality amongst the people living small villages and rural areas of the country. In my opinion, the colleges and universities can play a vital role in increasing the population of female students.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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