Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think computers are important and which areas are teacher important? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples of your knowledge and experience.

Computers are widespread used in many fields all over the world, especially in
education
. While computers play an essential role in educating, we can reject the
teacher’s
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teachers’
parts in class. On the one hand, learners approach knowledge more effectively by using computers. Videos, pictures and sounds are added which helps the lessons more vivid and interesting.
This
also
makes student’s interest in going to school and motives students to study better.
Furthermore
, people easily discover new knowledge, inventions and culture all over the world with a computer connected with internet.
For instance
, the Vietnamese
high-school
a public secondary school usually including grades 9 through 12
highschool
student can search for the information about places, citizens and culture of England or America without travelling a long way there.
This
not only broadens his
horizons but
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horizons, but
also
provides him opportunities to go
abroad which
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abroad, which
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
helpful for the future job.
On the other hand
, by understanding students level and characteristic, teachers have a huge success in both giving them knowledge and educating their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. When people attend any lessons, they learn both how to interact with friends and respect their teachers, resulting in their attitude to the life and other people.
Moreover
,
instead
of only showing the correct answers and information as a computer, teachers
have deeply understanding
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were deeply understanding
in each student potential and provide them suitable teaching methods to gain the best results in educating them. There are
also
some subjects requiring the attendance of teachers
such
as physical
education
, art and music. Based on these reasons, teachers still have an important part in
education
. In conclusion, the widely using of computers brings many benefits in
education
, but it is
declinable
that teachers make
an
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a
substantial contribution to educating as well.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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