Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is an obvious fact that
financial aspect
Suggestion
the financial aspect
is an essential factor of day to day
life
.
However
, many people believe that schools should make accounts related
subject
Complusive in
student's curriculum
Suggestion
the student's curriculum
. I do not agree with
this
assertion and
this
write up will justify my viewpoint in following paragraphs using some relevant examples. Not every individual want to pursue their future
education
in financial studies. Everyone has their own talent and interests. Like someone want to become
singer
Suggestion
a singer
or actor or painter. For them it should not at all mandatory to learn
accounts
Suggestion
accounting
.
Instead educational
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Instead, educational
institutes should allow pupils to choose a
subject
of their choice to shape their dreams and talent.
Furthermore
, my making a certain
subject
compulsory, students may not get ample time to do other indispensable things and sports and games.
This
point
clarify
Suggestion
clarifies
that making financial
education
must have
subject
is not worthy.
On the other hand
, it is true that little financial
education
and budgeting is necessary in daily
life
. Managing expenses, calculate
profit loss
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profit, loss
and investment require one to have basic knowledge of accounts.
However
, every school has basic mathematics as a compulsory
subject
of
students syllabus
Suggestion
the student's syllabus
student's syllabus
student syllabus
.After that, every graduate and senior secondary student can easily manage regular accounting.
For instance
, a software professional is able to calculate profit and loss of his regular earning.
Also
he can use his basic financial knowledge to do yearly investment.
This
scenario does not know the need of financial
education
at
early stage
Suggestion
an early stage
the early stage
of
life
. Concluding
this
, I would like to say, financial
education
is important but must not a Forceful
subject
.Everyone must have full access of what they want to learn and do in their
life
.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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