Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a gorup, rather than learning it individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Needless to say, every human being has his/her own ways of learning. Some people believe that, learn something in a
group
is better because it is efficient, and others find, sometimes, nature of content matters most
therefore
learning as
individual
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an individual
is an appropriate
way
to gain knowledge. Studying in a
group
is
a
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an
efficient
way
to learn something.
This
is because every single person
have
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has
their own
way
of thinking, and they can discuss a single notion with multiple point of views, and at the end, they can come to a single efficient solution. It is believed that a
group
of three people can solve a problem more efficiently than an individual person.
In contrast
, if the same work or problem solved by an individual, there are several chances, the solution will not be efficient, and his/her knowledge about that particular work will be remain same. Sometimes,
nature
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the nature
of the content
also
matters. In these situations, people like to study alone because they do not want to discuss openly with other people.
For example
, content related to sex education, a study conducted by
University
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the University
of London shows that 90% of people are shy in nature, and they do not find themselves comfortable to discuss and learn about sex education in groups. Ergo, it is better that, they should study about that privately because it is an extremely important part of our life. In conclusion,
although
,
group
studies is a comprehensive
way
to gain knowledge, but, we should
also
take into account, the privacy of an individual. In my view, expanding
someone'e
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someone's
someone
horizon much more important than the
way
of learning, and both the ways of learning is efficient according to different circumstances.

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