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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Computer screens have now become a commodity within every person’s reach due to the technological advancements and market competition. The children are especially attracted to computers and tablets which are found in every household and it has been observed that a
number
 of parents allow their offsprings to freely use them. In my opinion, there are a
number
 of psychological and medical shortcomings of
this
 practice which easily overshadow the benefits.
Firstly
, the
usage
 of electronic devices makes the children less family oriented. The
usage
 of computers and tablets minimizes the family
time
 of children.
This
 is because of the tendency of electronic devices to instigate addiction in their users. The children become emotionally attached to computer games and social media at a tender age when they should be spending more around parents learning precious life lessons.
Secondly
, the
usage
Suggestion
use
 of LCD and LED screens has been linked to a
number
 of health issues which may victimize children. A
number
 of studies have proven that the
usage
Suggestion
use
 of computers and tablets over a long period of
time
 causes
lumber
of or relating to or near the part of the back between the ribs and the hipbones
lumbar
 pains as well as eye sight deterioration. What is even worse is that these medical issues materialize over a certain period of
time so
Accept comma addition
time, so
 the parents would not notice a change in their children in the initial stages. It is with the passage of
time
 that its learnt what could have been prevented now has to be cured. In conclusion, there are far more serious issues linked to the
usage
 of computers at an early age than its advantages. The parents should curtail children’s screen
time
 to decrease their chances of developing health issues.
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