Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The advancements in communication technologies
has provided
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have provided
the people with a number of mediums to obtain news from. It is argued that listening to the
radio
is still the best method for receiving news.
However
, a number of people, including myself, differ from
this
opinion and tilt their take in
television
’s favour, considering it the best medium for news broadcasting. The one advantage that
radio
news bulletins offer is that they are more convenient to listen to. Unlike other mediums of communication, listening to the
radio
does not have space or environment constraints.
In other words
, you
do not have be
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haven't been
have not been
in your TV lounge to listen to a
radio
news bulletin.
Radio
stations can be tuned into on the move, on cell phones or car stereos so their news bulletins are much easier to follow. On the flip side, the biggest advantage with
television
as a source of news is its ability to
broadcast
international news channels. The world has become a global village of late and people need to be up to speed with all the worldwide happenings.
Television
has an edge over other mediums of communication as it can
broadcast
a number of international news channels bringing its viewers close to the world.
Moreover
, the ability of
television
to
broadcast
news using the senses of sight and hearing is what makes it different. People
can not
can not
cannot
simply listen to the
news but
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news, but
they can
also
watch the video clips and even live telecasts of local of international events. In conclusion,
television
is by far the best means of news
broadcast
as it shows visuals and has a global reach.
Radio
bulletins are easier to
follow but
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follow, but
my opinion is in the
favor
promote over another
favour
father
of
television
for its various benefits.

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