Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trenda and fashions than what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Leisure

activites

any specific behavior

activities

hold a vital place in everyone's life. Generally, people choose these

activites

any specific behavior

activities

activists

on the basis

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their own taste and

preferences but

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preferences, but

nowadays, due to

drastic shift

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a drastic shift

drastic shifts

in lifestyles and updating systems, these

activites

any specific behavior

activities

have

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changed according to ongoing trends. I completely agree that presently fun related

activites

any specific behavior

activities

are undertaken merely to show off status and attract people around. Admittedly, people in current society are more interested in those hobbies which are famous and are performed by their

celebrites

a widely known person

celebrities

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makes them feel up-to-date with latest styles and trends.

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, having gymnasium membership is considered to be a

most prefered

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more preferred

most preferred

things among young adults as they watch movie stars with attractive workout clothes doing exercise there. Another reason which incites people to take fashionable

activites

any specific behavior

activities

is the constant peer pressure. It has been seen in many people, especially children

Accept space

compel parents to

enroll

enrol

them in some unusual area of activity just because their friends are doing the same.

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, my 15

years

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year

old cousin started taking belly dancing lessons to participate in

reality dance show

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the reality dance show

a reality dance show

, under the influence of one of her

classmate

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classmates

. In conclusion, due to advancements in technology, lifestyle habits of modern public have modified greatly.

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, people choose those free time

activites

any specific behavior

activities

which are latest and are in demand and

this

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make

then

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more connected with others and appreciated in society.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

230 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Reflection of trends
Personal preferences
Social media influencers
Technological advancements
Generational shifts
Marketing and advertising
Traditional vs. modern hobbies
Societal expectations
Economic factors
Psychological need
Belonging and acceptance
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Fully explain your ideas

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Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words.