Nowadays leisure products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generation’s creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#leisure #products #gadgets #people #generation’s #creativity

There is certainly a debate on

this

either modern tools and gadgets reduce one’s

creativity

or not. In my opinion, these new products didn’t affect any

creativity

rather it gives new direction towards some aspects of life which was not possible before.

Firstly

, I don’t think new products and gadgets has any detrimental

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

creativity

instead

it gives new directions. In the past when these things are not

available people

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available, people

may find it hard to produce any creative thing due to limited

resources but

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resources, but

nowadays

its

it is

it's

very convenient for them to produce new things by using new tools. New gadgets help them to make and come up with things which are not possible in the past. New generations are fully aware of using these new tools for their own benefits and come up with new and better ideas.

Secondly

, social media plays a big role in shaping

modern world

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the modern world

. People get

inspiration

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inspired

by watching videos from all around the world with the help of single click from the comfort of their home or office.

However

, In the past its not easy to know

culture

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the culture

of other countries and people may have limited resources and knowledge about that. Their

creativity

revolves around the same area where they spend their life. Now people mix different cultures together and come up with innovative things.

For instance

Elan brand

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an Elan brand

from Pakistan introduce new lawn design by mixing Chinese and Indian culture and colour pallet which got sold like hot cakes. To conclude, I believe new gadgets and products actually help people to be more creative and produce things which are not possible in the past.

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