Nowadays leisure products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generation’s creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is certainly a debate on

this

either modern tools and gadgets reduce one’s

creativity

or not. In my opinion, these new products didn’t affect any

creativity

rather it gives new direction towards some aspects of life which was not possible before.

Firstly

, I don’t think new products and gadgets has any detrimental

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

creativity

instead

it gives new directions. In the past when these things are not

available people

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available, people

may find it hard to produce any creative thing due to limited

resources but

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resources, but

nowadays

its

it is

it's

very convenient for them to produce new things by using new tools. New gadgets help them to make and come up with things which are not possible in the past. New generations are fully aware of using these new tools for their own benefits and come up with new and better ideas.

Secondly

, social media plays a big role in shaping

modern world

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the modern world

. People get

inspiration

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inspired

by watching videos from all around the world with the help of single click from the comfort of their home or office.

However

, In the past its not easy to know

culture

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the culture

of other countries and people may have limited resources and knowledge about that. Their

creativity

revolves around the same area where they spend their life. Now people mix different cultures together and come up with innovative things.

For instance

Elan brand

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an Elan brand

from Pakistan introduce new lawn design by mixing Chinese and Indian culture and colour pallet which got sold like hot cakes. To conclude, I believe new gadgets and products actually help people to be more creative and produce things which are not possible in the past.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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omnipresence
transformation
traditional vs. digital creativity
self-expression
heavy reliance
reflective thinking
creative development
aid in
artistic avenues
stifle
evolution of creativity
medium
collaboration
global trends
diverse cultures

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Nowadays leisure products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generation’s creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

. Some people believe that children should be involved in making their school\'s rules. Others say that only adults should make the school\'s rules. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice

It is important for travellers and business people to understand the cultures they come into contact with, however briefly, what are the main advantages of doing so? what do you think is the main disadvantage of not doing so?