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Nowadays leisure products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generation’s creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#leisure #products #gadgets #people #generation’s #creativity
There is certainly a debate on
this
 either modern tools and gadgets reduce one’s
creativity
 or not. In my opinion, these new products didn’t affect any
creativity
 rather it gives new direction towards some aspects of life which was not possible before.
Firstly
, I don’t think new products and gadgets has any detrimental
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
 on
creativity
instead
 it gives new directions. In the past when these things are not
available people
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available, people
 may find it hard to produce any creative thing due to limited
resources but
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resources, but
 nowadays
its
it is
it's
 very convenient for them to produce new things by using new tools. New gadgets help them to make and come up with things which are not possible in the past. New generations are fully aware of using these new tools for their own benefits and come up with new and better ideas.
Secondly
, social media plays a big role in shaping
modern world
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the modern world
. People get
inspiration
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inspired
 by watching videos from all around the world with the help of single click from the comfort of their home or office.
However
, In the past its not easy to know
culture
Suggestion
the culture
 of other countries and people may have limited resources and knowledge about that. Their
creativity
 revolves around the same area where they spend their life. Now people mix different cultures together and come up with innovative things.
For instance
,
Elan brand
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an Elan brand
 from Pakistan introduce new lawn design by mixing Chinese and Indian culture and colour pallet which got sold like hot cakes. To conclude, I believe new gadgets and products actually help people to be more creative and produce things which are not possible in the past.
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