some people believe that the internet has brought people closer together by making the world smaller. others disagree, claiming that the internet has made people and communities more isolated because they no longer need to leave home and interact with others. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Whether or not internet has their benefits, but

this

topic becoming increasingly controversial. It is considered by some that being having technological facilities is the key to decrease the far distance among family and friends, while there are others who think that it is

create

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creating

a destruction on

traditional way

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the traditional way

of meeting to individuals because they prefer to stay back at home. In my opinion, I believe that having internet connectivity is essential for those who live away from their hometown while It has a negative impact on local society. On the one hand, many think that it is easier to make a

calls

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call

and massages to their own family while they working abroad.

In other words

, it is possible to develop easy communication with anyone who stay away from the each other’s. For an example, by introducing a mobile application

such

as "WhatsApp" which could allow to make video calls at any corner of the world.

Therefore

, these people tend to hold their view that it connects the different

nation

a vague idea in which some confidence is placed

notion

of group of people within

short time

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a short time

of period.

On the other hand

,

in contrast

of those people who argued that it creates a damaging effect on

basic way

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the basic way

to communicate with each other’s, they have reason to believe that because having everything is available on their computers by one click,

this

person does not want to come out from

apartments

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the apartments

. To illustrate that, many universities introduce

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an

online educational classes for those students who do not want to go and attend the face to face lectures in

institute

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the institute

.

Thus

,

this

view has justified that it led to harmful action on socialization meetings.

Finally

, in my opinion, people should balance their personal

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

when it comes for internet activity. In some cases, it is

really helpful resource

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a really helpful resource

to make instant fund transfer. Whereas, by hacking the website can cause

to threat of national

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threat to national

to threat to national

security. In conclusion, Data connectivity can establish a long

distant

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distance

relationship with

foreigner

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foreigners

a foreigner

, and some opposing the view that could be dangerous to collapse our fundamental way of engaging individuals.