Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel like it should be purely optional. Discuss both these opposing views and give your opinion.

Many hold the opinion that
physcial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
activity is an imperative subject in educational institutions, whereas, others think that children should be given the right to decide whether or not they want to
paritcipate
share in something
participate
in them.Both these views will be examined for the remainder of
this
essay, followed by a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, the benefits of sports are uncountable.
Firstly
, they pave the
way
for school kids to move their bodies in a fun and motivating
way
. Which is important because,
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
is one of the building blocks to total body wellness and health.
Therefore
, curriculum's should compromise of sports classes.
This
way
, they will complete their daily requirement of burning calories of 300 per day.
Secondly
,
this
set up facilitates a
way
for children to influence their families and siblings to lead healthier lives.
On the other hand
, it is argued by many that sports should be optional.
Although
there are tangible benefits, not all
yougsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
are interested in sports,
therefore
they do not enjoy them.
Furthermore
, many families take their kids to football, ballet and basketball lessons outside the school premises, for that reason they believe school should be academically orientated.
For example
, In conclusion,
althought
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe in human rights and freedom of speech,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
also
believe that
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
is an imperative subject in schools and should be
mandatatory
required by rule
mandatory
for children to participate in. In the future,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
hope institutions
worldwide provide
Suggestion
worldwide, provides
worldwide provides
worldwide has provided
physical activity classes.

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