Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that
television
has an educational feature, but some people considering that it has only entertaining
function
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functioned
.
This
essay agrees with the
first
statement because despite most entertaining
TV
content
there are many educational channels and programs.
Main duty
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The main duty
of the present
television
is to entertain people by using various entertaining
content
. There
is
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are
vast amount
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a vast amount
of
TV
shows, films and programs devoted to
this
only one purpose - to people have fun and relax while watching
this
content
. It is a big industry of making entertaining
content
, and
this
content
makes ratings to
TV
channels while
been
the state or fact of existing
being
shown, and
TV
channels make profit by placing advertisements between shows. And the entertainment shows are dominating
on
Suggestion
in
the air because of its profitability.
For example
, there are only entertaining shows on the federal
TV
channels at the prime time in Russia.
On the other hand
, there are many channels dedicated to educational and cognitive purposes. There are programs about history, languages, manufacturing, space exploration and many other educational aspects which are shown by some science specific channels and even traditional entertaining channels are showing some educational
content
sometimes.
For example
, there is a list of scientific channels
such
as National Geographic, Discovery, Animal Planet, and many others, and people could study some interesting facts about nature and science while watching them. In conclusion, despite
mostly entertaining function
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the most entertaining function
most entertaining function
,
television
could teach people if they would prefer educational
content
. And
TV
channels should paste more educational programs and films on the air to make
television
more useful and to contribute into people’s self-development.

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