Many people believe that social networking sites (Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

While, some mankinds trust that cross media
facebook
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Facebook
, Instagram and other applications have had a vast adverse effects both humanity and local communities.
However
, it is beneficial for people as well as
club but
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a club, but
a club but
it damages the relationship.I would discuss both views in the
up coming
of the relatively near future
upcoming
paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
reasons. The
first
and
prominent
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most prominent
reason, it has made easy to communicate with each other.
For example
, if a person
live
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lives
faraway
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far away
from own his
family
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family, then
then
he can easily connect with his family with the help of social
mobile
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mobility
. It is cheaper.
Moreover
, it has reduced the distance;
time
is saved. Everyone can easily connect with one another due to websites and make more friends. Contrary to
above the statement,
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the above statement,
it has some negative effects on individuals and union. Many people make fake news on these
websites after
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websites, after
that they viral it; sometimes it creates great issues in mankind's life, which is harmful for some individuals.
Furthermore
, nowadays,
mostly
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most
people spend their
time
on these social communication, they waste their
time
and they
procrastination
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procrastinate
their work day by day. For
this
reason, they do not achieve their goal easily.
In addition
, individuals do not take participate in any local activity, during
this
purpose relationship is less since people do not meet each other face to face. In the conclusion, social networking websites have beneficial of individuals and local communities, easy to communication,
time
saved. But it has negative influence it damages the relationship among people.
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