It is often said that government spends too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

People often debate on the protection of extinct animals and
on the other
hand they
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hand, they
also
debate on the amount of money spent by the
government
to protect wildlife.
This
is a type of
hypocrasy
an expression of agreement that is not supported by real conviction
hypocrisy
that demonstrates how the people question the
government
even after doing well. The public is hardly concerned about the costs which are indulge in
such
projects. The investment in
such
projects
are
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is
huge. Even sometimes the expenditure exceeds the estimated cost. The budgeting is done by experts and experienced personnels and it will be extremely disrespectful to question their abilities and competencies.
However
, in a country like India people may be concerned about the
coruption
lack of integrity or honesty (especially susceptibility to bribery); use of a position of trust for dishonest gain
corruption
or malfunctioning of the
government's
Suggestion
government
funds. I reckon the public should be provided with the essential information on
such
projects. The other problems which are recognised to have more significance in comparison to the protection of wildlife could be education, health and pollution. These are some of the sectors where the
government
needs to give more emphasis. The increasing population is not mentioned because education will help the people understand the importance of population control. While the increment in
health sector
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the health sector
has to be achieved by the
government
and simultaneously the decrease in population will help in the decrease in pollution. To recapitulate, I disagree with the statement above, that the
government
spends too much money in protecting wildlife. In my opinion, before questioning we must analyse that the cost incurred is right or there has been a malfunctioning in the balance sheet.

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