Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Co-education schools
plays
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play
a vital role in many countries due to its benefits. Others,
however
, argue that single-sex school seem to screen out a lot of gender issues that affect the student development. I believe that the advantages of mixed school outweigh the single-sex school
pros
a formal ball held for a school class toward the end of the academic year
proms
profs
. On the one hand, there are two main reasons that lead to the
essential
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essence
of separate schools.
First
of all,
student
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the student
a student
do not have
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does not have
to struggle with the competition from other gender which make them get risks. According to the analysis of many scientists, female is superior to male in the class due to their patience in any circumstance and it
sometimes make
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sometimes makes
male students feel frustrated.
Secondly
, in the single-sex schools, children have many opportunities to improve their skills equally like other friends.
For instance
, boys are good at some physical subjects while girls interested in art subjects.
On the other hand
, many reports concretely prove that the mixed schools ought to strengthen the relationship between male and female students.
As a result
, there are lots of harmful
effects but
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effects, but
it may prepare for children how to deal with those influences.
In addition
, students not only make friends with people in other
gender but
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gender, but
they are
also
able to learn from each other.
For example
, if boys extremely good at math, they may teach for their girlfriends and improve together. In conclusion, both these
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types
of schools have their own
benefits but
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benefits, but
I strongly believe that co-education schools make an outstanding contribution to the sustainable improvement of students.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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