Extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc are dangerous. Should these be banned?

There are some people who hold the view that extreme sports like water rafting and skiing are dangerous and should be banned.
However
, in my opinion, these sports do not possess any dangers if done correctly.
Through-out
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Throughout
history, human beings have had a love affair with extreme sports.
This
can be attributed to the adrenaline rush which one feels when involved in an activity that puts the body in fight or flight mode. Boxing, wrestling, race car driving, sky diving all have a certain degree of risk involved which make these sports addictive.
Moreover
, sports
such
as
football boxing
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football, boxing
and rugby can
also
cause serious damage to the human
body resulting
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body, resulting
in concussions, broken bones and causing injuries that can sometimes be crippling, reducing athletes to
vegetative state
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a vegetative state
. So why should these extreme sports be banned when the ratio of injuries in extreme sports
are
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is
as frequent as those in regular sports? Just like all sports, reasonable care must be taken to avert any risks involved in participation in
such
sports. Sufficient regulations must be put in place, and special medical staff available on call to help in case of any emergency. In
conculsion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, If the
requiste
necessary for relief or supply
requisite
request
precautions are taken, just like in all other sports. Extreme sports are not dangerous, but the level of care and regulations attached with these sports
are
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is
a cause for concern.

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