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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for family when mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

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With the rapid development of the technology, most of the household equipment has evolved and become fully automated appliances.
This
 improvement leads women to have much free time to do a job and improve overall
income
 to
family
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the family
a family
families
.
However
, if
both
 the parents are working,
then
 there is a high possibility
to
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for
 children to misbehave. Because of the growing economy, living
cost
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costs
 in every part of the world has increased enormously. If
both
 parents are working, that can significantly increase the overall
income
. With a good
earing
(law) a proceeding (usually by a court) where evidence is taken for the purpose of determining an issue of fact and reaching a decision based on that evidence
hearing
earning
eating
, a family can have a luxurious life without any problem.
For example
, a recent study showed that 78% of economically stable families have
their
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both their parents
both
 parents
work
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working
.
Thus
, it is good to have
both
 mother and father working in a family, so, they can have more stable
income
. Even though, a steady
income
 can provide all the necessities
to
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for
 a family, without
both
 parents at home, their children may do nasty things. Since they don’t have an adult to look after them, they will have enough freedom to play video games, watch adult contents on
internet
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the internet
 or even can take drugs.
For instance
, a recent police report showed in Sri Lanka, 65% of teenage drug takers are with a family background where
mother
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the mother
 is
also
 working.
Hence
, having
both
 parents working for a company may lead to have
detrimental impact
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a detrimental impact
 on children's future. In conclusion, to face with the demanding basic requirements, it is
good
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best
 if women
also
 can contribute to strength the family
income
. But
this
 can
also
 lead to some devastating impacts on children’s life including drug addiction. In my opinion, despite the amount of money you get, mothers should stay at home and look after their children and lead them to have a better future.
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