Using computers everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree.

Children start spending a lot of their time behind the

computer

screen from a very early age.

Although

using computers

enhance

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to enhance

academic growth and critical thinking

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however I

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however, I

am of the opinion that young children operating

computer

on a daily basis does more harm than good. There is no denying the fact that we live in a world dominated by technology. Some children have big imaginations.

For instance

, in

past there

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the past, there

the past there

were only crayons and water

colors

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

coolers

to dispose their imagination on

paper but

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paper, but

now

in addition

to drawing they can create three dimensional animation on

computer

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the computer

and allow it to take physical form.

Also

, earlier to gain information and knowledge children had to depend on books and

libraries but

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libraries, but

now they are exposed to a vast amount of information through computers which significantly enhances their academic knowledge.

However

, there are some drawbacks of operating computers on a regular basis.

Firstly children

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Firstly, children

who spend more time on

computer

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the computer

computers

a computer

than with others their age fail to develop social skills. Social skills are important not only for communication but

also

to develop self esteem.

This

in turn leads to depression and loneliness.

Secondly

, spending more time on

computer

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the computer

makes children lethargic. They tend to sit with

computer

games whole day and lack of physical activities makes them obese.

This

obesity can contribute several other health problems as they grow older.

Thirdly

, children who indulge more with computers are exposed to a variety of things available online. They cannot use their conscience to know what is right and wrong. In conclusion, computers help children with their academics and

entertainment but

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entertainment, but

parents must monitor the number of hours their children spend behind

computer screen

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a computer screen

the computer screen

computer screens

and

contents

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the contents

they browse.