Some people fail in schools , but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
Many students fail in exams during their school days but they become successful in their career and other aspects of life. The fundamental cause of
this
situation is their lack of interest in some subjects. Linking Words
However
, achieving academic goal is not the only step to success. One has to be hardworking in any field they choose and Linking Words
also
should have a motivating factor to achieve an aim.
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Firstly
, pupils are distracted to watch cartoons or play games while studying at home. Linking Words
Hence
, co-curricular activities amuse them more than that of studying educational subjects. Linking Words
Also
, many of Linking Words
them fantasize
to be an artist or tend to fall for other creative jobs and dream it as a career option. Accept comma addition
them, fantasize
For instance
, I was poor in mathematics and science. Repeatedly, I scored below average marks, shaming myself and my family. Linking Words
However
, I am a successful music teacher as singing and playing piano was my forte since I was a child. Linking Words
This
makes it clear that boredom in relation to studies Linking Words
often lead
some students to opt for other ambition.
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often leads
Secondly
, family members cannot impose education on any children. Youngsters have a right to desire something Linking Words
that is
admirable Linking Words
to
them. Suggestion
for
of
Therefore
, elders should guide and inspire juveniles in every decision they make. Linking Words
Finally
, it is the duty of the students to be diligent and enthusiastic about achieving their target. Linking Words
Thus
, hard work is the most salient Linking Words
component
which Suggestion
components
is required
to be a successful person.
To conclude, failure is the stepping stone to victory and ergo, should be taken as a stimulation to reach the goal. Suggestion
are required
Furthermore
, one should chase for excellence by making all the possible efforts to be prosperous.Linking Words
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