Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It is said that computers were the most significant creation of the
last
century. While I agree that the invention of
computer
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computers
the computer
contributed a number of benefits, I believe that there are still many useful
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
On the one hand, there are several benefits from the use of computers. From some basic skills of human life, computers help us to write more quickly and clearly. The documents
then
can easily
saved
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save
into
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in
onto
the disk in computer, which very helpful for
careless person
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a careless person
.
In addition
, people could find it quite convenient to send
email
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an email
with the helping of
Internet
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the Internet
and
also
get responds from the receiver sooner
instead
of waiting for the post office's working with several processes. Young people would enjoy the invention of computers as it
help
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helps
them to entertain with lots of amazing games as well as interesting websites in the Internet.
On the other hand
, computers would not be popular as it does if the other conventions were not explored.
For instance
, people could not experienced these advantages without the Internet. The Internet
contributed
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has contributed
the very important role in the use of
computer
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computers
a computer
the computer
. It connects people, helping people in
further
experiments, and many other things. It gives us instant access to information on almost any subject. Not only the Internet, electricity
also bring
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also brings
to human many benefits. It can be said that, owing to electricity, people can
invented
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invent
to the other equipments. Without electricity, computers could not
working
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work
and it has no meaning to us. In conclusion,
although
computers ar
e se
perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
seen
em the important invention, we should not dismiss the other creations

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