More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

In
this
contemporary era, there have changed to
living
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live
life style day to day. Plethora of agricultural people
prefer
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prefers
to move to city due to the work. In
this
essay, I will discuss intends of what are
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happening
to
this
phenomenon and how
to evaluates
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evaluates
this
perilous problem. There are
number
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a number
of causes creating by
this
stipe
any maneuver made as part of progress toward a goal
step
setup
strip
.
First
and foremost inimical cause is that the price of the food and vegetable should be increased.
In other words
, if all community commute to developed and developing city, so that the production of the food, which is one need of the humans, should decline, and
it
it is
it's
effect on the country economy growth. In a recent survey from United Stat,
for example
, almost 7% of the small town’s people transform to Washington every years for their future work. It can be solved to improving the all the agriculture needs as well as some types of lone should be given by their government authority. Another cause is that the developed
cites
assign a location to
sites
are being crowded.
That is
to say, if majority folks migrant from rural area to the big towns, that it should effect on the flora and fauna, hospitality and transportation. For illustration, in Pakistan from 2003, in the Karachi, population level augmented due to people needed
job
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jobs
, and which was effecting on the other factors of the Karachi. To tackle
this
issue,
government
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the government
should create some job in
small village
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a small village
, which root
this
problem Agglomerating, all the points of elaborated, it can be concluded that
this
detrimental step impact on the agriculture’s food prices and population
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in cities
incites
. My point of view the main responsibilities to solving
this
perilous problem lies with government.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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