Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be speant elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with that statement?

It is undeniable that, authorities could invest

proportion

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a proportion

of their budget, which has been spent on the

art

, on

more vital

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most vital

sectors. Adversaries of that notion,

however

, would put forward the idea that necessity of the

art

, which is on par with my accord. Above all, the arts,

such

as, musics or paintings, tend to have

salutary effect

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a salutary effect

salutary effects

on

human's

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human

psychology and nourishment of youngsters. The

art

can be considered as a not only reduction of the stress levels of

person but

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a person, but

a person but

the person but

people but

persons but

also

as

a

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an

essential tool to edify people's minds.

For instance

, as acute situations related to the psychology of

person

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personality

can be ameliorated through the classical musics, paintings can shed light on the history of the place, as well as, expand

imaginary world

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the imaginary world

of its audience.

As a result

, core subjects that are taught

at

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in

the schools or universities, are by no means the only source of knowledge, but people will be able to acquire

knowedge

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

and develop a sense for human sentiments through the arts,

parallelly

.

Furthermore

, the

art

sector, which contains

plethora

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a plethora

of workplaces in it, as an

artis

a person whose creative work shows sensitivity and imagination

artist

Otis

or singer,

for example

, possess its share in workforce in the country, if which is abridged,

copius

a reproduction of a written record (e.g. of a legal or school record)

copies

corps

of artists or the workforce, those jobs relate to them, would become jobless. To illustrate that, a museum

that is

provided by government's budget could be perfect example, in which

numerous of people are

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numerous people are

working. Through

allocationg

distribute according to a plan or set apart for a special purpose

allocating

election

allocation

fiscal aid for the

art

section, not only the government

become

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becomes

ingenioun

showing inventiveness and skill

ingenious

recepient

a person who receives something

recipient

recipients

via as tackling against the joblessness but

also

inhabitants are taking the benefit of it, as well, through provision of workplace. The conclusion to be drawn is that, perhaps the money

that

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that's

spent on the

art

the 3rd planet from the sun; the planet we live on

earth

, could be invested

for

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in

development another sector, but the

art

itself is one of the vital fields

that is

inalienable part

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an inalienable part

of the other sectors.