The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot rely on the same job or working conditions the whole life. What are the causes for these changes? How should people prepare for work in the future?

It is undeniable that, due to the rapid modifications in the workplaces, jobs that are available today, will not stay the same and
this
flux
has arouse
Suggestion
has aroused
the sense as the current jobs are not promising for the workforce.
This
trend has
stem
Suggestion
stemmed
from
extreme competitive milieu
Suggestion
an extreme competitive milieu
amid the people and humans should not concentrate on physical-hard works, no more.
Instead
of that they should be able to adjust
this
situation to beneficial one for them. The crucial factor
of
Suggestion
in
this
occurance
an event that happens
occurrence
is intention for the betterment and build competitive endurance of the manufacturers. To that end, they are making
effort
Suggestion
an effort
the effort
efforts
to boost productivity via
amenmends
the act of amending or correcting
amendments
on the manufacturing field.
For instance
, the hand made workforce can be replaced with automatic robots, that have more potential for manufacturing outputs.
As a result
, staff will suffer.
Furthermore
, currently, contemporary technologies are developing rapidly, that offer more advanced and more salutary
appoach
move towards
approach
of working.
Consequently
, in order not to fall behind from their competitors, organizations or
manufactrers
a business engaged in manufacturing some product
manufacturers
have to take advantage of them and upgrade them time to time. After all, the worker that has become
obselete
no longer in use
obsolete
will have to alter his
proffession
the body of people in a learned occupation
profession
professions
progression
with that which is still available.
Nevertheless
, not for confronting
such
problematic situations in the
future
,
plethora
Suggestion
a plethora
of opportunities
are
Suggestion
is
present on
next
generation's hand.
First
of all, as it can be
seem
perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
seen
, in the
future
non-
phsical
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
jobs will be prevalent.
Instead
of
integrate
Suggestion
integrating
the details of the cars by hand, humans may control and inspect the robots that are accomplishing the task,
for example
. On that occasion, only adequate knowledge can be the
last
resort to maintain the job and make the ends meet.
Moreover
, since the computer-based ways of reducing hard works are flourishing,
then
human's only
distanct
(often followed by 'from') not alike; different in nature or quality
distinct
feature stays his imaginative and independent cognitive skills, that are may be asked for human resources in the
future
.
Such
as, writers, doctors or constructors can be perfect examples that, computers are inept to manage without human aid.
Therefore
, knowledge and experience related jobs may be promising in the
future
. The conclusion to be drawn is that, in behalf of
advancement
Suggestion
the advancement
of workplaces, staffs tend to be abridged and to cope with that
difficulties
Suggestion
difficulty
they should possess unique capabilities that,
metall
Suggestion
met all
workforce is disable.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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