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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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Parents tend to provide their children with plenty of toys.
This
 essay will suggest that buying a large no of toys makes the children build greater intelligence is the biggest advantage of
this
 and children develop an introvert personality is the primary disadvantage. Kids are
bought
Suggestion
buying
 a big no of toys by their parents so that they utilize their mind
continuously
Suggestion
continuing
 to learn new things.
Now a days
Suggestion
Nowadays
 the toys available in the market are more of intelligence based toys where kids have to think wisely and use their mind to be able to play with toys and it is a known fact that more the mind is utilized more the
sharper
relatively low in price or charging low prices
cheaper
 it becomes.
For example
, a Rubik’s cube is the kind of toy where, to match the specific colour pattern the player is supposed to think of different patterns and the way to arrange the cube in
such
 a way that all the sides have the same colour on all its rectangles. Despite the advantages, playing with the toys have created a sense of reservedness in the kids. More the kids are engaged with the toys more they remain
inside
Suggestion
in
 the house and don’t tend to go out and socialize with other kids
this
, in turn, causes them to become shy and reserved. A recent survey carried out by local children society reveals that the kids who tend to play more with toys and remain inside their house have a sense of reserved and fill shy to face big gatherings. In conclusion, guardians offering plenty of toys can be advantageous for kids to make them brilliant,
however
, they must be careful about the choice of the toys as kids engaged in playing with the toys show a sense of reservedness.
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