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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

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Learning method
is always been
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has always been
 a debatable topic between
learning group
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learning groups
a learning group
 of people. Whereas supporting group suggest, people should hire a mentor to learn quickly, defending
group
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the group
claiming, it is
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, claiming it is
 a waste of money. I personally demand for a teacher to understand
new thing
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new things
. There are several reasons to have
guardian
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a guardian
 in the
learing
property that is leased or rented out or let
leasing
 duration.
First
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, learning with tutor can
ehance
increase
enhance
 one’s dedication towards a particular
subject
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. It is a
huamn
characteristic of humanity
human
hymn
humane
tendacy
an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others
tendency
 that work-
holic
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person
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can not
can not
cannot
 spare his
time
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 for
new
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new subjects
a new subject
subject
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.
Instead
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 of
this
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, he can adjust his
time
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 if there is an appointment with his mentor.
For example
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,
owner
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the owner
 of the company is the busiest
person
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 in the company and to learn new thing
such
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 as swimming, he can only allocate his
time
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 if his
appintment
the act of putting a person into a non-elective position
appointment
 is
alreay
prior to a specified or implied time
already
 fixed with the swimming teacher. Another reason is evaluation of learning outcome.
Although
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 answers and samples of learning output are available in the market, it is still hard for one to get step by step understanding of
result
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the result
 which is only possible with the
person
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 who is
master
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a master
 in the particular
subject
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.
For instance
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, while learning and practicing of writing test for IELTS, it requires a professional
person
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 who can evaluate essay
correctly which
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correctly, which
 is not possible with the online available correction tools.
Finally
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, new learner will never
knew
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know
 the right and quick method to finish his ongoing process.
However
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, the
person
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 who has been done or working on
same topic
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the same topic
 since long
time
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, can provide good advice on
quick
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the quickest
 way to get success easily. In conclusion, it is advisable to take guidance with
some one
a human being
someone
 who is good at your learning
subject
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 for achieving
predefinded
to define beforehand
predefined
out come
something that results
outcome
 with low effort and in minimum
time
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.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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