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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

#people #teacher
Learning method
is always been
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has always been
 a debatable topic between
learning group
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learning groups
a learning group
 of people. Whereas supporting group suggest, people should hire a mentor to learn quickly, defending
group
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the group
claiming, it is
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, claiming it is
 a waste of money. I personally demand for a teacher to understand
new thing
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new things
. There are several reasons to have
guardian
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a guardian
 in the
learing
property that is leased or rented out or let
leasing
 duration.
First
, learning with tutor can
ehance
increase
enhance
 one’s dedication towards a particular
subject
. It is a
huamn
characteristic of humanity
human
hymn
humane
tendacy
an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others
tendency
 that work-
holic
person
can not
can not
cannot
 spare his
time
 for
new
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new subjects
a new subject
subject
.
Instead
 of
this
, he can adjust his
time
 if there is an appointment with his mentor.
For example
,
owner
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the owner
 of the company is the busiest
person
 in the company and to learn new thing
such
 as swimming, he can only allocate his
time
 if his
appintment
the act of putting a person into a non-elective position
appointment
 is
alreay
prior to a specified or implied time
already
 fixed with the swimming teacher. Another reason is evaluation of learning outcome.
Although
 answers and samples of learning output are available in the market, it is still hard for one to get step by step understanding of
result
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the result
 which is only possible with the
person
 who is
master
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a master
 in the particular
subject
.
For instance
, while learning and practicing of writing test for IELTS, it requires a professional
person
 who can evaluate essay
correctly which
Accept comma addition
correctly, which
 is not possible with the online available correction tools.
Finally
, new learner will never
knew
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know
 the right and quick method to finish his ongoing process.
However
, the
person
 who has been done or working on
same topic
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the same topic
 since long
time
, can provide good advice on
quick
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the quickest
 way to get success easily. In conclusion, it is advisable to take guidance with
some one
a human being
someone
 who is good at your learning
subject
 for achieving
predefinded
to define beforehand
predefined
out come
something that results
outcome
 with low effort and in minimum
time
.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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