Should people get a job right after school or should they attend university. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Recently, school leavers
having
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have
a dilemma of moving to the
next
chapter of their lives. Some students prefer to
further
their studies by attending to
university
while others prefer to work immediately after graduating from school. Let us look into the pro and cons of these options as it is
crucial
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a crucial life decision
life
decision for them. Apparently, most teenagers opt to attend college or
university
as to get professional certificate as it is one of the main requirements of most professional occupations
such
as doctor, engineer and
nurse
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nurses
a nurse
. They will learn all the skills, theories and technique they need to acquire in order to obtain the career of their
choice
.
Furthermore
, going through
university
life
, they will gain maturity to handle
difficult situation
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a difficult situation
difficult situations
in the future.
Although
enrolling
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the enrolling university
university
may cost a fortune and challenging at the same time, but it is rewarding. Meanwhile, some young adults venture working lifestyle right away after finishing school as they think it is a better way to gain experience of the real world. They have the benefit of saving money at an early age and obtained skills
such
as
life
skills and social skills that cannot learn in
university
.
Moreover
, they could venture
further
new path in business and potentially land in a multimillionaire job. Despite of that, it may limit the
choice
of career as they do not have certificates and some employers may trick them by giving them
low salary
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a low salary
low salaries
as they still young to notice it. In conclusion, it is their
choice
to decide which path is the best
choice
for them. In my view, going to
university
or college would be
better option
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a better option
as it would expand the job opportunity
further
as
university
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the university
already have programs to improve social skill and to prepare student for working
life
.

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