Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants. Do you agree or disagree?

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Eating healthy and tasty
food
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is everyone’s
first
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choice to become fit and healthy. Some are of the view that single people and family should opt for preparing and having
food
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at
home
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while other things
otherwise
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. I certainly assert
this
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notion as preparing and eating
home
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is not only
healthy but
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healthy, but
also
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economical unlike eating out. Fresh vegetables and oils are of the paramount importance in order to harness the real nutrient of the
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food
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food, however
however
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, It is almost unlikely that
consumer
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consumers
the consumer
a consumer
can gauge the
quality
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for
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of
content which was being used
for
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in
the
food
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we intake in restaurants and cafes.
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, having a meal out
at
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of
your best cafe or restaurant is often an expensive affair for
an
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a
normal income person which could easily disturb the finance for
whole month
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the whole month
.
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, preparing
food
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home
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surely ensures us the
quality
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of the
food
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that we are eating. As we know our
food
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ingredient, specially vegetables and oil better as to, how and how much to use in order to prepare healthy and tasty meal.
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, as far as opting for ingredient is
concern
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concerned
, people can certainly shop for better
quality
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material which is good for cuisine and healthy.
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, it
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also allow
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also allows
people to save enough amount of money, when they eat
home
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because
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food raw material
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the food raw material
and staples are usually affordable since brought in quantity. All things said, preparing
food
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and eating
home
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usually ensure best
quality
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food
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due to usage of optimum
quality
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ingredients and cheap
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since
only raw material
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the only raw material
is needed to prepare
food
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which is affordable.
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