Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants. Do you agree or disagree?

Eating healthy and tasty
food
is everyone’s
first
choice to become fit and healthy. Some are of the view that single people and family should opt for preparing and having
food
at
home
while other things
otherwise
. I certainly assert
this
notion as preparing and eating
home
is not only
healthy but
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healthy, but
also
economical unlike eating out. Fresh vegetables and oils are of the paramount importance in order to harness the real nutrient of the
food
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food, however
however
, It is almost unlikely that
consumer
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consumers
the consumer
a consumer
can gauge the
quality
for
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of
content which was being used
for
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in
the
food
we intake in restaurants and cafes.
Additionally
, having a meal out
at
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of
your best cafe or restaurant is often an expensive affair for
an
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a
normal income person which could easily disturb the finance for
whole month
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the whole month
.
On the other hand
, preparing
food
home
surely ensures us the
quality
of the
food
that we are eating. As we know our
food
ingredient, specially vegetables and oil better as to, how and how much to use in order to prepare healthy and tasty meal.
Also
, as far as opting for ingredient is
concern
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concerned
, people can certainly shop for better
quality
material which is good for cuisine and healthy.
Furthermore
, it
also allow
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also allows
people to save enough amount of money, when they eat
home
because
food raw material
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the food raw material
and staples are usually affordable since brought in quantity. All things said, preparing
food
and eating
home
usually ensure best
quality
food
due to usage of optimum
quality
ingredients and cheap
also
since
only raw material
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the only raw material
is needed to prepare
food
which is affordable.
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