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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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While the primary purpose of
a
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an
 image acts a
supportive
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supporting
 character of a news report, it is thought by some people that pictures are now often used as a
strong
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stronger
 technique than a thousand words by the channels of media. I do accord on with the idea that visuals connect more sharply with the audience than just a pack of words, especially in terms of interpreting in a simpler way and using universally. An argument in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of using as a medium for everyone is that mass people regardless of the age, sex, religion, and so on can perceive a picture soon enough than a full-fledged story.
Consequently
, as there is no
such
 universal language than just
a
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an
 image, consisting more information demonstrates anything but a luxury.
This
 can be seen by the growing number of people who like to scroll more for images than statuses or wordy updates in South Asia. There is,
however
, another way possible way of defining the effectiveness for visuals is that less time is
required whereas
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required, whereas
 words in
news
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the news
 make us to read or listen for a longer period.
In addition
, relying on images, which give birth to instant impression, becomes more frequent not only for televisions or newspapers but
also
 for individuals. According to
recent study
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a recent study
, restaurants in Europe who own menus with picture grab 30% more orders than those who don't. All the things considered, I am inclined to restate that since people across boundaries have grasped the gist of a picture in a glance from the very beginning of human civilization, visualized news
was
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has been
 just a matter of time for happening in
real
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reality
.
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  • irrefutable evidence
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